
I really didn't like the main character. She annoyed me. Really annoyed me. I thought she was whiny and I can't really stand whiny. As the story progressed she got less whiny and more wise, but I just didn't believe that it was happening that way. Her character developed in ways that didn't make sense to me.
Plus I thought that a lot of the jokes were forced. I felt that the author was actually trying to insert a certain number of national identity related jokes at certain intervals. Some of the were amusing, yes, but they still seemed to belong to a different story.
Because I didn't find the characters or their actions believable, I didn't really care about them. That's never good.
It's such a shame, because I think that the author's idea was fantastic. I just think that the development of the idea could have been a lot stronger.
Challenges: A-Z Challenge, Orbis Terrarum Challenge
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